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Take me to the alter,
Lay me down where everything is soft,
Love me like a brother,
Tell me what I should do and what I should not,
Hold me like a lover,
When you know that person's all you've really got,
Kiss me like my mother,
When she knew her child's fever was running hot,
Take me,
Back to that place,
Where I was in your arms,
Take me,
Back to that place,
Where I was warm.
©2008-2010 ~Survive-Love
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This is a song I wrote, a little blue grassy if you ask me.. It's about lost love and redemption. You never know what you have until it's gone.
The whole title (couldn't fit) is ("Take Me Back," Said The Child.)

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:icondorisj:
This is Beautiful!
:iconsurvive-love:
Hah! Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. It will be the first recorded song I post up on my myspace so you need to drop by in about 5 days or so and I'll have a journal with a link, so you can actually listen to it. Thanks again! <3

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"My aims in life are only this.. To survive, and to love.."
:icondorisj:
Very awesome!!!!!!!!!! I will have to make sure I do drop by!
:iconsurvive-love:
Sweet I'll be looking foward to hearing what you think about it. Thanks again! <3

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"My aims in life are only this.. To survive, and to love.."

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